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=Issue 4 - Farewell= =Writer's Deadline: April 10th =

**Editor's Notes**
** Note to Authors :** Please **submit** your article to the **"Awaiting Editor Revision"** section with this format: (uploaded document) Title of Article (type of article) by Author of Article An example is:

[[file:movie_review2 (edited).docx]]The Imaginarium of Doctor Parnassus (movie review) by Grace Ko
To eliminate future confusion, please **name your document with this format**: articletitle_authorname Thank you for following these guidelines! It makes it a lot easier for us to organize! :)
 * After you submit**, CHECK BACK to this wikispace for Lenz's edit! It will be in the "**Awaiting Author Revision"** section (and deleted from the "Awaiting Editor Revision" section. If it's still there, **DELETE IT!** This prevents confusion and makes it a lot easier to organize!)
 * After revising your article**, upload it again to the **"Articles Ready for Layout"** section with the following document name: articletitle_authorname_final

=** Article Assignments **= Prashanth - Crossword Ecolumn - Edwin √ Teacher Feature - Roy √ Student Spotlight - Ji Young Poem - Bryan √ Creative Writing - Victoria √, Vrishti, Ryan, Angela, Shane √, Dorcas (might do music spotlight thing), Joy √, Dianna √, Sydney √, Jennifer √, Allison √ Editorial - Sofia, Gwen Comic - John Artist Spotlight- Claire √ Expository Writing- Tara

Sorry if I spelled any names wrong (:

=** Submitted Articles **=

= Awaiting Editor Revision = = = = Hey guys really really sorry it's so late. It's my last article ever and I was really struggling with it the whole time... hopefully it's not too late? - Micky Wong = Pictures (I was thinking since this article is about growth, maybe do a picture of me then and a picture of me then? Resize however you want): = =

= Teacher Feature: "Farewell, Mr. Burgess" by Roy Du (Related picture below; re-size however you want) =

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**Awaiting Author Revision** -Good quotes but I feel like you need more to add on this foundation. Try to wrap the article around the theme more. David Z

-Check the comments about the language(s). David Z -I think you need a concluding paragraph. David Z -You switch from past and present tense a lot but favored past tense so I made the necessary changes. Second to last paragraph needs work. David Z -Very minor issues. David Z Claire, I've taken out more bits, and changed some wording. See if this works for you. Ms. E Suggestions now in writing. David Z Roy, this looks good. Can you please send this to Mr. Burgess to give the final OK? Ms. E Very minor changes. Ms. E -Minor clarifying changes needed. David Z LAYOUT:JOYCE = Articles Ready for Layout = == =layout: kate= =Bryan Saldanha It is ready for layout= This has been edited and is ready to go. Ms. E layout: jordan Its ready. David Z - who is this written by? Written by: Victoria Yu layout: kate layout: angela Good to go. Ms. E Illustration: Charlotte Changed the title to match the point of the article more. Ms. E layout: keli Chi Wei, we need some pics. . . layout: jordan

it's revised: sydney layout: keli revised - Jennifer layout: daniel Zen of Being Green "Embrace Time. Bid Farewell :)" by Edwin Zen - Picture above of Sumatran Tiger Cub and the chimpanzee friend bidding farewell (probably not what's actually happening, but it's how it can be interpreted to tie in with text). From - http://primatology.files.wordpress.com/2007/02/tiger-orangutan.jpg layout: daniel edited Allison layout: kate

- (fixed something small, re-uploaded again -.-)For the layout can you make the colors mainly red, black, and white? The band's known for always using those colors and stuff. Thanks :) WAIT I NOTICED A FEW TYPOS SO I CHANGED THEM SORRY THIS IS THE FINAL COPY **Claimed Articles (Check Layout Page)**

=** Articles that are FINISHED (finished means layout finished, packaged and ON THE SERVER!) **=