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=Issue 2 - Retrospect/In Review=

= Writer's Deadline: **November 13th, 2011** =

**Editor's Notes**
** Note to Authors :** Please **submit** your article to the **"Awaiting Editor Revision"** section with this format: (uploaded document) Title of Article (type of article) by Author of Article An example is:
 * If you're having problems uploading like I am to the Wikispace, feel free to e-mail your articles to Ms. Edmunds or one of the other members of the executive staff to upload them for you. - Lenz**

[[file:movie_review2 (edited).docx]]The Imaginarium of Doctor Parnassus (movie review) by Grace Ko
To eliminate future confusion, please **name your document with this format**: articletitle_authorname Thank you for following these guidelines! It makes it a lot easier for us to organize! :)
 * After you submit**, CHECK BACK to this wikispace for Lenz's edit! It will be in the "**Awaiting Author Revision"** section (and deleted from the "Awaiting Editor Revision" section. If it's still there, **DELETE IT!** This prevents confusion and makes it a lot easier to organize!)
 * After revising your article**, upload it again to the **"Articles Ready for Layout"** section with the following document name: articletitle_authorname_final

=** Article Assignments **= Kevin Jou/Kevin Zhu: Retro Gaming Edwin: E-column Roy: Teacher feature Ji Young: Student Spotlight Creative Writing: Victoria, Jennifer, Tiffany, Dianna and Tim Guan Evolution of Comics: Who is this? Please fill in your name if you signed up for this article. Gwen and Amanda: Fashion trends over the years Racism then and now – Jimmy Being a TCK then and now – Sofia What we thought the future would be vs. what it actually is – Dorcas

=** Submitted Articles **=

= Awaiting Editor Revision =

-Alvin Wang. I really don't like what I've written here. I would be completely okay with just writing a whole new piece. (I don't want to edit s/t that radically changes, so go ahead and re-work, then re-submit, okay?)- ECOlumn, by Edwin Zen. Hi Ms Edmunds, I changed the writing almost completely because the old one was far too rant-y and not an enjoyable read (if I position myself in the reader's seat and saw my article, I would not want to read it). I'm not sure how this one will work out.

**Awaiting Author Revision** NIce job, girls, and yes, your children WILL be wondering what you were thinking! You need to upload your pics separately -- please do so ASAP so that layout can get to work on it. Ms. E

For Mickey's article:



= Articles Ready for Layout = FYI Ji-Young wants the hyphen in her name FYI Matthew Chui, not Chin. Please make sure that you have the entire article for your layout -- no left-out words, paragraphs or pages!

Daniel Ruan

kevin ma

Daniel Ruan

Alex Zhang

Daniel Ruan

= Claimed Articles (Check Layout Page) =

=** Articles that are FINISHED (finished means layout finished, packaged and ON THE SERVER!) **=

Jennifer Guan - I added some more details on the setting of each 'flashback', hopefully that'll add to the feeling of each era. **I found some really interesting pictures of Shanghai from 1949 here (**http://www.chinatoday.com/history/shanghai.old.pictures.htm) **, if you're interested in doing a 'looking back' themed photography spread.**

= Joyce Siu =

Tait Gu

Sam

Keli Fung

kevin ma

Life in retrospect by Harriet Ryu

Pictures that might work:

kevin ma

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 * [[file:5 Ways to Stop Slacking Off_Jimmy_Final.docx]]Jimmy Zhao - Yo this is the article that didn't make the cut last issue :**


 * Jimmy Zhao - Finally pulled something off. Thanks for the advice Ms. Edmunds.**

Roy, please re-submit Dr. Dodd's picture separately from the text -- you can send it to me if you like.

<---Dr. Dodd Angela Wu

Sydney Liu

My Great-grandmother

-I'm not sure if this is the kind of epiphany you were talking about, but hopefully, it seems more complete now.--Victoria

Angela Wu

-Alvin Wang Alex zhang