10-11+Issue+4

Deadline: = Issue 4= Theme - Smoke and Mirrors

** Note to Authors :** Please **submit** your article to the **"Awaiting Editor Revision"** section with this format: (uploaded document) Title of Article (type of article) by Author of Article An example is: ==== The Imaginarium of Doctor Parnassus (movie review) by Grace Ko ==== To eliminate future confusion, please **name your document with this format**: articletitle_authorname
 * After you submit**, CHECK BACK to this wikispace for Lenz's edit! It will be in the "**Awaiting Author Revision"** section (and deleted from the "Awaiting Editor Revision" section. If it's still there, **DELETE IT!** This prevents confusion and makes it a lot easier to organize!)
 * After revising your article**, upload it again to the **"Articles Ready for Layout"** section with the following document name: articletitle_authorname_final

Thank you for following these guidelines! It makes it a lot easier for us to organize! :)

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**Awaiting Author Revision**

GIFTS article [edited].docx**- Good start. Just a few things I need you to look at for the way you've written the article. We should be good after, though. - Lenz** Grace, please take a look at these comments and revise. After revision, you may move it down to ready for layout. Ms. E



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gnups for layout and layout-finished articles have been moved to the layout page! = Articles Ready for Layout =

This article was forgotten from Issue 3; I think it should be included in Issue 4. It's good! Twisted the title to reflect this issue's theme more. Ms. E



NEEDS TO BE DONE

//**-**// //**-**// **Looks good now. Should be ready for layout. - Lenz** NEEDS TO BE DONE.

**- Outside of** **a few grammatical and stylistic changes, nothing much needed to be done with this. - Lenz** The Prestige" movie review by Eric Du

Ready for Layout - **Good, det**ailed piece.- Lenz This article is by Kevin Zhu and Kevin Jou

= Claimed Articles (Check Layout Page) = Alex - Interview for Dummies - Ecosoapbox - The prestige - Student Spotlight Endless Destruction needs to be turned in Livia's needs to be turned in K Ma - Fresco Jiayi - TI Calc layout Alex - Flaming Crepes Alex -Teacher Feature needs to be done by Jiayi

Brittany Herr WORD Article.docxAn article about Factory Farms in China -- not quite related to Smoke and Mirrors but very well-written! Ms. E Angela Wu

[|angela_wu issue 4.zip] Done supposedly. Needs to be copied on USB and given to me by end of today (friday) Alex

Flaming Crepes [edited].docx**- Made minor edits that really don't need to be checked. Should be good for layout now. - Lenz**

Chi Wei, does layout have the pictures you too

I'll do this layout. Alex Zhang

-by akshay verma //(layout: Jiayi)//

**Jiayi, you need to submit this to me.** **-Alex Z.**

- very well :) Thanks Ms. Edmunds // Kevin Ma //

This was just assigned. Alex Z.

Angella Liu

[|Endless Destruction in Japan Folder.zip] NEEDS TO BE GIVEN TO ME

funny practical advice for college interviews. Ready for layout -- Ms. E

ALEX Z. WILL DO.

Jiayi - here are my layouts.

Final Layout Needs: May 17
done.

done. Magic 2pgs; Future Reflections; 2 pgs Illusive 2 pgs; On Display 1 pg Poem 1 1 pg(Giulia-Christina, not Guilia) = ** Articles that are FINISHED (finished means layout finished, packaged and ON THE SERVER!) **=

Note: Teacher Feature (Gould) Student Spotlight (Cynthia) Alex's Long Long Article

All are next year's articles..... we also have some stories and poems that we can use for Issue 1, Vol 7!

- Sweet. Kevin Ma DONE BY TAIT GU

**- I founds this oddly intriguing and disturbing at the same time (in a good way, of course). Nice piece of work. - Lenz** **Maggie Zhang DONE** **- Another good piece. No edits necessary here. -Lenz** //CLAIMED FOR LAYOUT - Wei-Wei DONE//



This is done

Goes first, with Alex's "Compassion" piece following.

Well-said, Alex -- you should write more often! Lay-out team, please plan these 2 articles together, with JX Xu's article first. Ms. E //**Exactly what we were looking for. Thanks. Layout: Maggie DONE**//

**Solid work. Look over the comments and see if they're to your agreement.** //Totally agree with all comments.// ** //Thanks (Layout: Livia Xie)// **

**I think both Livia and Ma did this layout... I'll talk to them both and figure it out.** -Alex Z.

**- Once again, I quite like the style in which you present your topic. However, I feel the article could be improved with some enunciation, clarification and added detail. You know the drill, look over the comments and tell me what you think. - Lenz** //CLAIMED FOR LAYOUT (once it's edited, can you upload a final version later? Thanks :D) - Wei-Wei THIS HAS BEEN DONE. NO EDITS.//

Dude Vol. 6 Issue 4.docx This one is ready for layout. Ms. E Keli Fung

Done.

-I made the images smaller to take less space but when you drag the images off the site they return to normal size. David Zhao ===**Angela Wu Can we save this for next year's first issue, and do Jiayi's Ms. Sampson Teacher Feature, since Ms. S is leaving?** ===

- newly edited version of interview: hey lenz, got rid of the first question, added about 4 more questions, and about the picture, I'm working on getting one so I'll upload that near this soon. - Emily Zhang (btw its cynthia)**Feel free to move this****over as soon as you're done. Emily, can this wait for next year, Issue 1, and put M & C's student spotlight instead, if we can get hold of it. Grace, is it done yet? Ms. E**

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-Livia Xie

[smokeandmirrorscover1/smokeandmirrorscover2] - MaxandConnie Wang. Uploaded two options for the cover (file titled as left) We're more partial to the first one, but the choice is up to you. Also could we make the request that reduce the opacity on the "WORD magazine" bars on the top and left to keep with the minimalistic theme? Thanks. ^ Thanks. This will be done. -Alex Zhang

- Alex Engels. use which ever parts you want its quite extensive. ===**Alex, there are 5 parts to this story, and the story as a whole is too long to publish together. I think you should continue to work on it, and edit it so that there are 4, not 5 parts. If you continue to work on the quality of the writing, and finish the last part (it leaves off mid-sentence) then we can publish one per issue next year. Ms. E** ===

This is what we will do, then. - Alex Zhang Save till next year.