11-12+Issue+1

=Issue 1 - FIRE= ===Please be reminded to check back regularly for your edit. Also remember that you are still free to make other changes asides from the ones included in the comments placed in your article as suggestions I have for you to improve your article or queries to clarifying some of your article's meaning. Thank you. - Lenz===

=Writer's Deadline:= = SEPTEMBER 20 =

**Editor's Notes**
** Note to Authors :** Please **submit** your article to the **"Awaiting Editor Revision"** section with this format: (uploaded document) Title of Article (type of article) by Author of Article An example is:

http://teachers.saschina.org/evoge/

The Imaginarium of Doctor Parnassus (movie review) by Grace Ko
To eliminate future confusion, please **name your document with this format**: articletitle_authorname Thank you for following these guidelines! It makes it a lot easier for us to organize! :)
 * After you submit**, CHECK BACK to this wikispace for Lenz's edit! It will be in the "**Awaiting Author Revision"** section (and deleted from the "Awaiting Editor Revision" section. If it's still there, **DELETE IT!** This prevents confusion and makes it a lot easier to organize!)
 * After revising your article**, upload it again to the **"Articles Ready for Layout"** section with the following document name: articletitle_authorname_final

=** Article Assignments **=

=** Submitted Articles **=

= Awaiting Editor Revision -= - Hey Lenz, I made some changes to it. And hopefully it's what you're looking for. Thank you ~ Tiffany W

**Awaiting Author Revision**

= **Finished Articles** = - Jimmy Zhao. Beast.
 * Not doing because lack of space on magazine:**

-Life Without Fire by Joy Yu. (layout: angela)

= Claimed Articles (Check Layout Page) =

All below will be done by Alex, unless specified otherwise. - Skateboarding by Matthew Chui

-The article went through the entire editing process last year. David Zhao- Chi Wei Zhang- Kate Ma (layout: Angella)**-**

- Ji Young Lee, Student Spotlight

= Claimed Articles (Check Layout Page) =

=** Articles that are FINISHED (finished means layout finished, packaged and ON THE SERVER!) **= piece on the 2011 London Riots by Micky Wong. Ok I revised the article and restructured a bit. Hopefully it works better now. Sorry I still haven't been able to spend as much time as i would like on it - IB soul eating XD **[Lenz]**


 * [[file:Burned Alive (Book Review) - Emily Cocq.docx]]- I really like the way you presented your opinion on the book, it was really engaging. I need you to look over the article to see if you agree to the changes, as I made quite a few modifications to the sentence structure. - Lenz**Fits in quite well with issue theme. See if you can find some words that are used during cremations (in multiple languages would be best) to add in italics between the lines of the text. Ms. E

**- No need for further edits from me, this was an excellent piece of work. Good job. - Lenz layout: Joyce Siu** -Dorcas Tang - Added your changes, think it's better.

- Harriet Ryu (Layout: Maggie) - Dan Ni, Frank Wu -Ashes (Final)-Victoria Yu (Layout: Maggie) = ** Dong Kyu Lee's Fire comic strip ** = - Jennifer Guan. Creative Writing (layout: angela) - I agree with what you said about the ending, it does kill the purpose. I adjusted it to make a connection with the introductory paragraph. - Edwin (Layout: Maggie - Kate Ma (layout: Angella) D

- Chi Wei Zhang

Lenz, this is excellent and thoughtful writing -- meticulous attention to the music. Had to Google Billy Corgan, of course! 1-2 places where I feel your phrasing isn't clear (see comment) and some awkward working I just went ahead and changed. Do you have pics to go with your review? Ms. E Good serious slightly scientific article about how to put out fires. A hook that SAS students can relate to, which ties into an ending which SAS students can relate to, might make this strong article even stronger. Ms. E - Eric Du, **Layout: Tait Gu** -Sofia Rada's poem (Layout: Angella)
 * [[file:Cremation Vrishti's poem.docx]]Fits in quite well with issue theme. See if you can find some words that are used during cremations (in multiple languages would be best) to add in italics between the lines of the text. Ms. E**
 * [[file:Alvin Wang Technology [edited].docx]]- I think this is a pretty good start. Have a poke around the comments and see if you can make it better. - Lenz**

-Flame of the Forest (previous Forest of Flame) by Grace Lu Sofia, I like the feeling of progression of danger, but I'm not sure some of the stanzas fit with that progression. Please see comments on your document. Ms. E Lenz, this is excellent and thoughtful writing -- meticulous attention to the music. Had to Google Billy Corgan, of course! 1-2 places where I feel your phrasing isn't clear (see comment) and some awkward working I just went ahead and changed. Do you have pics to go with your review? Ms. E